The women’s conference each year brings together more than 1,000 women opinion leaders in business
and government sectors, including top ministers, from some 95 countries worldwide. Put this sentence in
pink immediately after the previous sentence. You don’t need to skip a line. Also, add a space after
comma following “ministers,”

As an official partner to the Seoul Global Summit of Women Conference (2004), CJSW handled all relevant
media activities and coordinated among the conference organizing committee, foreign and Korean
media outlets.